in a song, will someone tap me gently on the shoulder and say, "Dude, that's a really STUPID FUCKING THING TO SAY!" But be nice like...like you actaully care...thanks


"dozens other"?...Ty..Jeff...what were you guys THINKING!!!!!!

we'll fix it in the mix

I was gonna say something but I was too embarrased to bring it up.

I thought..."Well he's the artist...maybe he's going for some sort of ethnic or pan-cultural dialect of the English language...or maybe it's some sort of 'new beat' thing the kids are doing these days".

At least you didn't try to rhyme "orange" with "syringe" or try to use the word "befuddled" in your song.

Dozens other? Is that the stupid phrase? Context?

It makes perfect poetic sense, you people have no appreciation

"she danced for dozens other than him" is the meaning, and makes the line more specific to *ango.

It also relates to the idea that these dozens of men each saw themselves as the particular focus of her attention: at that instant, as she danced - they saw themselves not as one of dozens. There may have been "dozens other" than him too, but he also did not despair (though for a different reason than *ango)

lastly, it's the kind of clever, insightful and multi-dimensional lyrcal twist that separates the Dylans from the Nugents

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Originally posted by Ed Phobes:
There may have been "dozens other" than him too, but he also did not despair (though for a different reason than *ango)

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are you sure that him (and the "dozens other" like hin) really did not despair? . . . why else would they be there watching her dance if they didn't? *ango was different than the others (maybe . . .)

good art always stirs debate

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Originally posted by Ed Phobes:
It makes perfect poetic sense, you people have no appreciation

"she danced for dozens other _than him_" is the meaning, and makes the line more specific to *ango.

It also relates to the idea that these dozens of men each saw themselves as the particular focus of her attention: at that instant, as she danced - they saw themselves _not_ as one of dozens. There may have been "dozens other" than him too, but he also did not despair (though for a different reason than *ango)

lastly, it's the kind of clever, insightful and multi-dimensional lyrcal twist that separates the Dylans from the Nugents

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"I dont know where they come from but they sure

do cum. . .I hope they're cumming for me!"

Brilliant.

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Originally posted by thechrisproject:
Dozens other? Is that the stupid phrase? Context?

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she danced for dozens other
but he did not despair

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(it's this kind of thing that makes a song a hit

too fucking funny

I laughed my ASS off...(saline, is yours for rent?)

you guys ROCK!



I spent most of the nite begrudging that the vocal was not sung to a melody. that really bugs me, so you know...(yes, REALLY!)

still, I laughed at this fuckin thread. too much

This is all news to me. What the hell is going on?

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Originally posted by Ed Phobes:
It makes perfect poetic sense, you people have no appreciation

"she danced for dozens other _than him_" is the meaning, and makes the line more specific to *ango.

It also relates to the idea that these dozens of men each saw themselves as the particular focus of her attention: at that instant, as she danced - they saw themselves _not_ as one of dozens. There may have been "dozens other" than him too, but he also did not despair (though for a different reason than *ango)

lastly, it's the kind of clever, insightful and multi-dimensional lyrcal twist that separates the Dylans from the Nugents

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You reached so far with that one that you should have said "excuse me" first.

I like "dozens other"... I will start using it. It reminds me of "passersby".

You know what word I've heard too much in the past few days? Well not too much, but an inordinately large number of times (3)... "egomaniacal".

Also, two other words I've learned in the last week:

defenestration - a throwing of a person or thing out of a window

prognostication - an indication in advance

Prognostication would be a good name for a modern prog rock band. Or maybe the sneakier "foretoken"... eventually people would realize that prognostication is foretoken and be like, "wow... those guys are deep... and their drummer rules".

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Originally posted by Tor Galore:
You reached so far with that one that you should have said "excuse me" first.

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I notice, however, that you don't (can't???) say I'm wrong

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Originally posted by Ed Phobes:

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Originally posted by Tor Galore:
You reached so far with that one that you should have said "excuse me" first.

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I notice, however, that you don't (can't???) say I'm wrong

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You were conversing with yourself earlier in the thread...it's best not to argue with a crazy person.